International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?
Over the past few decades, International tourism has increased significantly in many countries around the world. While this trend is concerned beneficial by almost people, I believe that there are several drawbacks should taking into account.
It is undisputable that International tourism has brought with its numerous benefits. Firstly, people deciding to travel abroad for their holidaymaking has contributed huge amount of money to local economic of destination country through variety actions. In fact, foreign tourism has spent their budget mainly for local services like hiring a tour guide when visited any historical attractions. Secondly, globally spreading of International tourism does have the potential to foster greater understanding and tolerance between people with multicultural backgrounds. Therefore, this trend provides destination countries golden opportunity to introduce their nation identities with others.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks that the development of taking vacation outside nation border has cause. This flux of mainly International tourism, especially from western, has brought with it such problems like prostitution, alcoholism and drug abuse in many countries around the world. In addition, other negative impact of this trend is environmental degradation. Vast sections of coral of Great Barrier Reef in Australia, for example, was gradually destroyed by countless boats, divers and snorkelers that have visited the reef over the past the decades. Similarly, world renowned Kuta Beach in Bali has become heavily polluted in recent years.
In conclusion, I believe that there are numerous benefits as well as drawbacks, which are mentioned above, of the development of International tourism brought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91015625 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01924319454 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2894347837 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169045219952 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631376976273 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514329392731 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104402296374 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304392780335 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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