that planning and organizing abilities are vital for every individual
With the advent of human's modern society, more and more people have reached the point that how essential is planning for the future. A plethora of people attributes the importance of planning ability to the complexity of the modern world. Personally, I completely support this point of view that planning and organizing abilities are vital for every individual. My reasons are manifold, among which reducing stress (tension) and having enough time to gain knowledge play the most significant roles.
An issue of concern turning into an obsession for many (a large proportion of) people is the high rate of psychological disorder like stress. According to a research, conducted at the University of Tehran, the number of individuals who are faced with extreme stressful conditions (circumstances) is increasing exponentially comparing to the previous decade. For this reason, they highly recommend having a general plan for our life, by means of which we are able to organize different matters relevant to the plan. In addition, it contributes to a high level of self-confidence, since one should not worry about numerous possible difficulties anymore. The result of that study indicates that ones with the ability to organize and plan for their works will be more prosperous in the future. In other words, the more plan one enjoys, the higher self-confidence.
Beyond a shadow of a doubt, possessing a higher knowledge and information about situations increases ones' chance for being successful in various subjects. One who has a lot of information and knowledge is more likely to pave the way toward the apex of success easily because in this modern world almost everything is dependent(is intensively related to) on information. For instance, the Eddy Dusler, the founder of Addidas, had been planning for a company to produce sporting clothes (goods) since he was a teen. To boom his business he made a wise plan to use (utilize) numerous prominent athletes for the company advertisement. Consequently, it led to one of the best companies throughout the world.
To sum up, considering different aspects of this issue we may reach the conclusion that the ability to plan and organize is a crucial matter, since it provides some advantages, including reducing stress (as a result of increasing self-confidence) and improving one's opportunity to become prosperous due to the information and experience he or she gains based on their plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21683673469 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04897954915 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56887755102 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.543781629 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8125 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347975780605 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110361898707 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120739886597 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196199035971 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087933031218 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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