Our life is full of ups and downs. To keep up with many circumstances in your life, Sometimes we need to make up stories to maintain a good relationship with our friends or family. Some people think that is wrong and telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship, no matter how hard the situation is. As far as I am concerned, I think that telling the truth is not going to work in many situations and to some extent, it might hurts.
First of all, telling the truth is sometimes ruthless. As a matter of fact, concealing the reality might brings out better outcome and save people's lives. For example, if someone diagnosed with an early stage of cancer, the doctor suggested that it is better not telling him that he or she has a cancer. According to many research that conducted by many scientists that seventy percent of cancer patients dying right after knowing the truth about their illness. However, those who are not aware of having this deadly disease, they have hope in recovering fast and sometimes their heath improved a little bit. As you can see, not telling the truth is helpful in certain circumstances.
Secondly, telling the reality might hurt people's emotions. Often compliments are crucial for people to fell good about themselves and increase their level of happiness. For example, two months ago, my best friend was trying hardly to lose some weight since she started to put in too much weight. As a result, she started to do a lot of exercise and controlling her eating habits. Two weeks later, when II met her at the mall, I found that there is no change in her body and I know the hard working that she did to lose weight. Instead of telling her the truth, I told her that she looks great to make her feel happy
about herself. This example demonstrates that telling the truth will hurt people unintentionally .
Admittedly, telling the truth is a key component in any successful relationship. We shouldn't lie to our parents or the one whom we love them. To be honest with the people you love will bring joy and peace. The one who is telling the truth will not have to worry about making up stories to make their lies seem true. However, sometimes concealing the truth is crucial in some situations.
In a conclusion, we should tell the truth to maintain a good relationship with the people around us. But, in certain situations, we should cover the truth because not only the truth is harsh but also the truth hurt people emotions.
- TPO 49 INTEGRATED 73
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- Most advertisement make products seems much better than they really are. 60
- eating at home or at resturant 60
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67120181406 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56722638212 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519274376417 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6732859901 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171342732409 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559333239283 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546914396337 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100871951068 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039677020166 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.