Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People from every different culture, came with different habits, even if in same country. Thus, community is important while the difference happened. Such as the gesticulate in TW which use both first finger and middle finger to show others that you are happy when you taking a photo. On the contrary, in England the sign also means ‘ f**k you’. If your friends from England and they do not know the gesticulate yet , it better to tell them first before a misunderstanding.
Nevertheless, investigated the different habit and following the customs are also important before we knowing someone familiar in a new place. For example, if I went to Edgy or played the role in a movie, Sex and the City, I would never change a cloth which exhibit that I am a tourist, but custom wearings, due to avoid bad things happened, rubbed, be killed and etc... The contrary is too huge to communicate; hence, to follow the local custom habits are initial.
In my point of view, obeying local behaviour and customs are a respect, a class that we all should learn, unless we have a faith or religion which just contrast the local behaviour, or there is no excuse to do that way.
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Sentence: Such as the gesticulate in TW which use both first finger and middle finger to show others that you are happy when you taking a photo.
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