Integrated task
The passage tells about scholarship which offers for student who can fulfill the requirement. That requirement are for journalism major, an active student in campus, and join in social community.
Meanwhile, the speaker says that he has two candidates for recipient, named Beckie and Ralph. Beckie is student who concerns in journalism subject and she loves to work as journalist on magazine office. She has many activities on campus like play a violin, part of journalism organization, member of photography club and so on. She also actives in outside campus to help other people who suffers, for example she is being volunteer in local hospital.
On the other hand, another contestant names Ralph, is student in science major, biology. He interests for taking journalism courses at his campus because he is investigate on science subject. He works as researcher on campus laboratory and spent his time there. But, He does not join in social activity outside campus.
In conclusion, there just one candidate who can complete the requirement, named Beckie.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 170 250
No. of Characters: 860 1200
No. of Different Words: 107 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.611 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.059 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.696 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.313 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.555 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.222 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4