In today's society, life is becoming more impersonal and individualistic. That's why having friends, it's for me very important. But, I have a mix view when it comes to friends because it's not so easy. I don't think that one of the statement is more important than another one. I need both.
First, keeping old friends is for me the most important. If you have a friend for a long time, that's mean that he knows you very well and he can help you when you need it. For instance, if you have a problem or a decision to make, an old friend will be able to help you and give you good advice. On the contrary a new friend may not do it very well.
Second, with old friends you can share everything. You will not feel any shame because you know that he has already saw you in ridiculous situations for example.
Lastly, when you have a huge problem, it is common to say that best friends are always with you. They never let you alone and they don't care in what people think.
Although I really believe that it is very important to keep your old friends, I also think that it's necessary to make new friends. In your daily life, you're always evolving and changing; that's why sometimes you can't share everything with old friends because they just can't understand exactly your new way of thinking. With a new friend, it could be easiest to evolve ant see the things differently.
It's also important to have a large relationship with different people. Like that you will be open-minded. In this way, new friends can make you discover new things such as a new place to visit or a new sport activity. For example, I lived in Barcelona for two years and I made new friends, actually, Spain friends. It was very interesting for me to meet new people. I was alone, without my old friends, and my new friends made me feel good. I could enjoy visiting the country and going out. I also changed my mind being with them. They helped me to think in another way, because they made me share a new culture, their culture.
For all these reasons, I think that both are important. You need to keep your old friends, they will be there for everything but you also need new friends to evolve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ividualistic. Thats why having friends, its for me very important. But, I have a mi...
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...joy visiting the country and going out. I also changed my mind being with them. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, lastly, may, really, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, you know, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38213399504 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37823295135 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476426799007 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7947203194 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4074074074 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9259259259 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284992730407 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853135283904 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066711649991 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160350428655 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642143804547 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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