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Students should choose subjects for themselves?
Curriculum enables children what they want to become in future.It sets their future directions.If the pupils will choose their subjects.However, they would make mistakes.Because they are too immature to decide curriculum on their own.They will choose easy, interesting and unimportant subjects.
On the other hand, this decision will be made problem by students for school; hire too many teachers, because every student have their different subjects. Therefore, it is not practiced anywhere in the world.
Subjects are decided by curriculum boards are better for children's educati...
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