Nowadays, Sports events has become very popular across the world. To looking at the popularity of these events, many countries host it. But hosting of international sporting events has also become matter of discussion as some peoples are favor of it but some people criticize it. For me, however, it will be better for the future of a country when they host an international sporting event which can be explained as below.
Firstly, it provide economic benefit to the country. The host country earns massive amount by selling of tickets, telecast rights etc. Besides, it provide a number of employment opportunity to the people of native country.furthermore, It promotes tourism in the host country through which more foreign currency is earned. Secondly, It provides a tremendous boost for the improvement of infrastructure in the city where the event is hosted, such as road facilities,new hotels for boarding and lodging, swimming pools,communication facilities,new sports stadiums etc that too at the international standard. And also, it raise prestige of the host country among the comity of nations. However, we cannot ignore the downsides.
The major limitation of hosting the mega events is spending of huge amount of public funding. Notably, the amount which are spent in infrastructure like swimming pools etc sometime go futile which could be invested for other social benefit for example in parks, housing development etc. Not only that, the country has also to spend plenty of amount in safety of sports persons and public either local or foreigners. There are so many countries who are regularly attacked by terrors like India, Pakistan and other Islamic States. Safety is another matter of concern for these hosting countries.
In conclusion, despite of cons of hosting the sporting events, I believe strongly that benefits which it brings to the host country is much more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29605263158 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99010805677 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4922182656 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306213003166 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960378510146 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733410287807 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200510566803 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831100486153 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.