Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People always have been making various opportunities to handle their life, they try different jobs to grow in their work and to find their interest. As a matter of fact, I support completely the statement above and I explicate my opinions in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, as our life is changing and we as a human like to learn and gain more experiences, so it is better our job to be multitasking. When people work on different things they will learn how to think differently, how to solve the problem and this is the main way to satisfy ourselves. When we are working on many types of tasks we do not get bored and we pleased to work.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be addressed is when worker work on different tasks not only they have more fun also they have more and different physical motions. By having different tasks we can make sure we are eliminating some of the physical sicknesses like a backache or neck ache. For instance, I worked in one task in my previous job and always I had a backache but in my current job, I am working with different machines and equipment that make me feel healthier and happier.
Finally, not only it is easier to find out the weakest and strongest point of ourselves but also, it gives the manager the ability to see those points and let worker grow on the right path. Moreover, according to the latest research that published in California university magazine, 76 percents of worker will satisfy by their job and the situation when they have different tasks on the daily basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
People always have been making various opportunities to handle ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sks we can make sure we are eliminating some of the physical sicknesses like a backache or ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62909090909 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61186105714 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.7831483155 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273368146461 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107468965277 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903011489663 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156671220309 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529237503591 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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