how technology affect our life?
In today’s technology-driven world, a burgeoning growth of machine has triggered concern worldwide. In this regard, whether or not did technology makes our life become more complicated is a controversial issue. Although numerous people assert that it only pose threat to our lifestyle, I, however, partly agree with the idea.
Profoundly, it is irrefutable that technology had the revolutionarily influences on all walks of life. Particularly, these cutting edge technology, creating for household appliances has free people from burden of chores, which is the repetitively tiring manual labor. To illustrate, the robotic vacuum cleaner is invented in order to wipe out the dust automatically. As a natural sequel, this would save human an array of time and energy as well as produce them facilitate lives.
Having said that, despite its advantages, the detrimental effects should not be neglected. Firstly, overdependence has turn human beings into slaves of machine, increasing the rate of many fatal diseases such as obesity and autism. More to the point, machines also act as disturber as it blurs the border between work and leisure. Accordingly, people, especially children hardly could focus on their work because of the distraction from technology. Besides, people are also struggling with the security problems because of cyber-crime and information stealing.
In conclusion, I strongly advocate the idea that the benefits from technology also create the difficulties in lifestyles, depending on the users. Therefore, the using technology time should be limited and controlled. By doing so, the drawbacks from over using technology could be minimized
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| 2017-07-20 | tmlong2000 | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ered concern worldwide. In this regard, whether or not did technology makes our life become mo...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over using technology could be minimized
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60079051383 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16729802535 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4163879393 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166962164339 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524942249503 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070800218785 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101373632148 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799443537909 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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