The graph below compare changes in the birth rates of China and the US between 1920 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph shows the information about figures of birth rates in China and the USA from 1920 to 2000.
Overall, birth rates of both countries decreased gradually in the period of 80 years. Those figures of America was slightly higher than that of China.
Between 1920 and 2000, birth rates in America were fluctuated around 10% to 13%. However from 1940 to 1945, this porpotion sharply declined to under 5%. The year of 1950 saw the significant increase of birth rate of America which was exactly 15%. After that, this number tended to slowly fell to approximately 7% in the year 2000.
Birth rates of China shared the same trend with the line of America. In the period of 15 years from 1920 to 1935, these figures were varied more significantly than that of America. In 1940, it fell sharply to 5%. In 1950, the birth rate reached to it highest point in the whole line which was 20%. Through the remainder of time, these porpotions continuosly decreased to approximately 3% by the year 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...rica were fluctuated around 10% to 13%. However from 1940 to 1945, this porpotion sharp...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...merica. In 1940, it fell sharply to 5%. In 1950, the birth rate reached to it high...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the highest'.
Suggestion: it the highest
... 5%. In 1950, the birth rate reached to it highest point in the whole line which was 20%. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69318181818 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40283815484 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.16535429 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199441802524 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799505568413 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791688970198 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152005564615 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727687310853 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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