Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write an inquiry letter to your new employer with a suggestion to hire your close friend or relative. In your letter say
– Who is this person?
– Why should your employer hire him/her?
– Suggest what job he/she should be doing.
Dear HR Manager,
ABC Private Limited.
Greetings for the day.!!
I am Divya Patel, recently joined your organisation as a Marketing Executive. I am writing this letter to recommend my cousin who will be willing to join our esteem organisation as a Software Engineer.
I know that we have 3 vacancies for Software Engineer in our firm and one of them is for ASP.NET developer so I thought to grab a chance and suggest you to schedule an interview with my cousin who is looking for a job in our town. My cousin has completed his Master's in Computer Science in 2013 from Pune University, and started work there in one of the reputed MNC called Infosys and during his tenure he had gain lot of practical knowledge, leant how to work in team. He had awarded as a Most Efficient Employee of the year consecutively for last 3 years due to his excellent performance throughout the job and still working there. But now, in coming month he decided to settle in our home town with their parents and looking for a job so I suggest to that call him once for an interview and I am sure you will definitely hire him as we need talented, hardworking and efficient employee like him to grow our organisation.
I hope you will take my suggestion in a positive way.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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| 2017-07-30 | jay.patel.4545 | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...organisation as a Software Engineer. I know that we have 3 vacancies for Softw...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... I hope you will take my suggestion in a positive way. Kind Regards, Divya
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56465517241 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71949284786 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6975705482 44.8134815571 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145116088065 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516068561434 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447629276941 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581208170938 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585186643714 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.