Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they heve a greater role in raising children in most societies.Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.State your point of view

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...er carry out their function effectively.However,lots of people argue that women nurture...
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...y out their function effectively.However,lots of people argue that women nurture thei...
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...nurture their kids efficiently than men.According to me,both of women and men also have a...
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...nurture their kids efficiently than men.According to me,both of women and men also have a vital...
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...ids efficiently than men.According to me,both of women and men also have a vital part...
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...mportant of father in bring children up.Firstly,men usually teach their kids how to rep...
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...how to repair something or fight spirit in worst situation by hardiness way.Secondly,the...
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...rit in worst situation by hardiness way.Secondly,the father also put disciplines on stud...
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...orst situation by hardiness way.Secondly,the father also put disciplines on studies,...
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...e father also put disciplines on studies,playing games,indoor or outdoor activities,gett...
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...aying games,indoor or outdoor activities,getting up in the morning.This would be generat...
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...or activities,getting up in the morning.This would be generate good habit for childr...
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...ld be generate good habit for childrens.In addition,men have more responsibility t...
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...ate good habit for childrens.In addition,men have more responsibility to their famil...
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...best condition finance which helps them studying in good university or even starting the...
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...n starting their own business. However,one children just developt completely if ha...
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... starting their own business. However,one children just developt completely if have an imp...
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...ely if have an impact from their mother.The main reason why I suppose that women pl...
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...ming from their nine month of pregnancy.Besides,mother also have sensitivity to find wh...
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...om their nine month of pregnancy.Besides,mother also have sensitivity to find what prob...
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...ind what problem their childs facing up.For example,teenagers usually have first lo...
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...oblem their childs facing up.For example,teenagers usually have first love with same or di...
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...love with same or different sex friends.On this time,mother will be the best suita...
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...me or different sex friends.On this time,mother will be the best suitable person in fam...
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...otion and being given meaningful advice.Another things children can be received from th...
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...er in sewing and cooking. In conclusion,I still believe that both father and moth...
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...rtant in children's formative edge.Even if the way father or mother teach child...
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...or mother teach children is not the same,there'll be a huge impact on their offspring....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, another thing, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68548387097 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70665199211 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.718314888 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.5 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.5 7.06120827912 489% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131216813297 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882861743396 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039264024496 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882861743396 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039264024496 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 13.0946893788 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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