Plants can provide food, clothing, shelter or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or to the people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Plants play important role on the Earth. Through photosynthesis process, they clear air by exhaling oxygen and inhaling carbon dioxide from air. They provide food such as grains, fruits, and vegetables; clothing as thread can be made by cotton; shelter as wood is use to build houses; and last but not the least as a medicine. There are various plants in every country which are useful in various ways. In my country means in India, coconut tree is considered as a very important tree. Because, coconut is considered as a fruit of god; and its whole tree has various uses.
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