The topic is about if pterosaurs are capable of powered flight. The reading passage introduces three arguments that are against powered flight. However, the lecturer rejects each of the arguments and states that pterosaurs may be capable of powered flight.
First, the reading passage argues that pterosaurs were probably cold-blooded and they were not able to generate enough energy to fly. The lecturer suggests that new fossil discover indicated that pterosaurs had dense, hair-like covering that was like fur, which is typical of warm-blooded animals. Fur keep warm-blooded animals warm when they are in a cold environment. If pterosaurs were more like that of warm-blooded animals, their metabolism is faster, and they were able to generate enough energy to supply flight. This is the first obvious divergence where the lecturer disagrees with the reading passage.
The second argument presented in the reading passage is that pterosaurs were too heavy to stay aloft because they could flap their wings fast enough. On the contrary, the lecturer says that pterosaurs had the structures like the hallow bone, which made them unusually light for their size. Their weight is probably low enough to flap the wings fast to stay afloat. This is the second point where the lecturer challenges the reading passage.
The last evidence the reading passage uses to argue is that the back legs of pterosaurs are too small and weak to support them to run fast enough or jump high enough to launch themselves into the air. The lecturer reasons that birds use two legs to walk on the ground. This is different from pterosaurs. Pterosaurs used all four legs to walk, which cause no trouble for them to run fast or jump high, even the largest one. This is the last point which the lecturer uses to clarify that pterosaurs may probably be able to fly.
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Essay evaluation report
The topic is about if pterosaurs are capable...
The topic is about whether pterosaurs are capable...
flaws:
No. of Words: 307 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
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Be sensitive to deliver all of the content below, maybe one of them when you don't have enough content:
This is the first obvious divergence where the lecturer disagrees with the reading passage.
This is the second point where the lecturer challenges the reading passage.
This is the last point which the lecturer uses to clarify that pterosaurs may probably be able to fly.
It will create duplicated content.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 12
No. of Words: 307 250
No. of Characters: 1502 1200
No. of Different Words: 144 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.893 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.424 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.581 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...that pterosaurs had the structures like the hallow bone, which made them unusually light f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02605863192 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46795932803 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475570032573 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3556371691 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402703327019 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138897304752 0.0996497079465 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894657752401 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241782345864 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258446020493 0.0443174109184 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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