Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Happiness depends on human psychology and responsibility is inevitable for everyone. Some says teenagers are the happiest people in the world however adults enjoy their time more than anyone else. Not only the economic independence but also, the freedom of making choice is a crucial factor for this. Everyone, teen to adult, has to take responsibility. In my opinion, adult life is the happiest part of human life regarding all aspects.
Firstly, teenagers have less economical freedom than a mature person whereas an adult can earn and spend money wherever he/she wants which is limited for young people. For instance, if a youngster wants to buy a car, he may be questioned by his guardian but situation is totally opposite for a grown up person. So, a mature person is happier than a teen.
Secondly, independence of making choice is partial among teen agers because of their inexperience, though, in case of an adult, he has the option to make his own selection without any barriers. For example, if an adult wants to travel any place, he can move there but for a juvenile, sometimes it is difficult. This situation can be an obstacle to be happy for this young people.
On contrary, taking responsibility does not mean that a mature person will be less happy, rather it means more people who are keeping trust on that particular person which brings happiness. A teen who has less duty never ensures that he or she will be very happy. A father’s responsibility to his family can be a good example of this. If he can complete his massive duties properly, he becomes happy which is incomparable to anything.
In conclusion, both financial liberation and liberty of making choice have significant effect on becoming happy in life, only age does not matter much and there is little scope to lead a life without duties. I think that teenage age is blissful part of our life, which is full of good memories but adult life is most blissful experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dult life is most blissful experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84523809524 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76156959943 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9628063063 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16499598638 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535519572597 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753334201526 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930055871269 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697767580341 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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