Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, having access to a variety of information is crucial for people to excel in life. Personally, I think that a myriad of information , which is available on the Internet is advantageous for our society. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, the Internet helps people increase their intelligence. There are a lot of different free of cost articles and enciclopedias on the web, and everyone who wants to learn something new can use them as a source of knowledge. My own experience is a compealling example of this. When I just started learning English, I could not afford to take English classes or to hire a private tutor. However, I was capable of finding necessary studying materials for beginners on the Internet such as videos about basic grammar, pronunciation, and intonation. As a result, I was able to enhance my language skills without any external help. It was incredibly important to me since I had to speak the language in order to move forward with my career. To that end, information on the Internet contributed to my intellectual improvement.
Secondly, the vast amount of personal information which is presented on the Internet helps people to communicate. These days, barely every human on the Earth has a profile on Facebook or Instagram where everybody posts their personal pictires, videos, as well as they share their experience and opinions with others. In this way, even if people are not able to interact to their friends and relatives in person, they still are capable of remote participating in each others lives. For instance, currently I live in the United States, but my home country is thousands miles away, so, I do not see my loved ones often. Despite this fact, I still can keep in touch with them through the social networks. By reading their posts I always know what is going on in their lives and as a result, I stay connected with them constantly. That is how personal information on the Internet regarding my friends` life helps me to interact with them.
In the conclusion, I strongly believe that information represented on the Internet improves our lives. This is because, it makes us smarter and help us to socialize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly, I think that a myriad of information , which is available on the Internet is a...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es us smarter and help us to socialize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 375.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.872 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90958783886 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8884381745 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.35 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20022694846 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580149990213 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408580848836 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113111029729 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489521273339 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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