TPO 47
The article states that pterosaurs were unable to fly or to flap their wings and provides, three reasons of support. However, the professor disagree with it and believes that there are several asserts proving their capabilities and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the Pterosaurs as modern reptiles are cold-blooded. The professor posits that new finding shows their metabolism is similar to warm blooded creatures using the evidence of furs which is discovered to cover their body.
Second, the article claims that only light creatures have the ability to fly, and a Pterosaurs can't fly. The professor opposes this point by explaining the unusual light bone characteristics of a pterosaurs. As a result she believes that, the hallow bones helps the pterosaurs to flap the wings and fly's.
Third, the reading says that the animals with flying capabilities are able to take off the ground, while large pterosaurs couldn't take of which is caused by disability of jumping and running. The professor also opposes that point by explaining their ability to push off the ground, run fast and jump high by means of four leams, in spite of other two leams animals. furthermore she states that, in spite of the flyable creatures which usually uses their behind limes to push off, pterosaurs used their four leams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'severals'?
Suggestion: severals
...ree with it and believes that there are several asserts proving their capabilities and ...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... blooded creatures using the evidence of furs which is discovered to cover their ...
^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ve the ability to fly, and a Pterosaurs cant fly. The professor opposes this point b...
^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a pterosaur' or simply 'pterosaurs'?
Suggestion: a pterosaur; pterosaurs
...e unusual light bone characteristics of a pterosaurs. As a result she believes that, the hal...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rosaurs. As a result she believes that, the hallow bones helps the pterosaurs to flap the ...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... off the ground, while large pterosaurs couldnt take of which is caused by disability o...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and running. The professor also opposes that point by explaining their ability t...
^^
Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...s, in spite of other two leams animals. furthermore she states that, in spite of the flyab...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...s, in spite of other two leams animals. furthermore she states that, in spite of the flyab...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...furthermore she states that, in spite of the flyable creatures which usually use...
^^
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that, in spite of the flyable creatures which usually uses their behind limes to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, second, so, third, while, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08636363636 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5745536402 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5613554297 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29549867978 0.272083759551 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115569707885 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610678640931 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168323924436 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019922576829 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.