Some people think that the age limit for driving should be increased to make driving safer, do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the age enough for using private vehicles should be increased to decrease the number of accidents in many countries. I completely disagree with this idea.
There are a variety of reasons why the minimum age for driving should not be increased. Firstly, when people was 18 years old, they are mature enough to aware what they should do and what they are not permitted to do. When the increase of the age for using vehicles, it is evidence that people can not drive their car to go to the office or the school. This has negative impacts on their regular life. Secondly, the increase of age limit to drive means the increase of age to work that has detrimental influence in the workforce of almost countries. This may result in the development of the economy in many nations.
Apart from the practical disadvantages expressed above, I believe that the age enough for using private vehicles should not be increased. One the reason is that in many developing countries, the public transportation is not responsed the demand of inhabitants, this may detrimental impacts on the work as well as the study of young people. Another reason is that the limit of age driving has negative effects on the development of car business as well as other private vehicles. This may lead to the detrimental impacts on the economy of many nations.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it is not essential to increase the age enough for driving to make driving safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65770869874 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.519392756 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9230769231 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356049847272 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129581799704 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111945280867 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243659761577 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919219283309 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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