Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and relevant examples.
These statement is about users of computer usually get more negative than positive impacts when they use a computer everyday. As a writer, I agree with the following statement.
The main reason is a computer provides many applications which can influence people stay for a long time in front of computer. Most of applications that are provided by a computer are games and entertainment medias. In modern era, several users of computers are children, so they will not have great future if they always spend their time for playing a computer which provides many useless applications. For example, children do not like study when they play a computer because they prefer to play games which are provided by computer than play useful features, so they do not have any ability for working when they grow up.
The second reason is the majority of users do not realize that they can get some diseases when they play too long in front of computer screens. They do not know because they do not understand about some diseases. Actually, the light of computer can damage the eyes of user when the user is not able to control the distance between their eyes to the screen computer monitors. Users also will get some diseases in their backbone if they do not pay attention to their position when they play computer. For illustrate, my cousin has to use glasses when he is 12 because he always played computer without paying attention for his body when he was child.
In another hand, most of people believe that computer has more positive than negative effects because computer provides many useful medias, such as, dictionaries, social networks, and many medias of education. For instance, there are many Indonesian students use a computer to finishing their duties from their college and university.
As a result, a computer has many positive and negative effects. Can you dare to utilize a computer for the best?
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Sentence: In another hand, most of people believe that computer has more positive than negative effects because computer provides many useful medias, such as, dictionaries, social networks, and many medias of education.
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