tpo25-integrated writing
The reading claims that the vessels which excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line were antique electric batteries.However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some compelling evidence to refer them all.
The author argues that the vessels don't have been attached to some conductors such as metal wires; so they weren't electrical batteries. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that this reason is highly questionable due to the fact that these vessels discover with the local people not with the archaeologists.It is maybe happen that in their perspective, wires were uninteresting and they threw them out.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that these copper cylinders seem exactly like copper cylinders discovered in an ancient city located nearby.The latter cylinders were used for holding scrolls of sacred texts. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that this cylinders have abundant uses.The major use for electricity and the minor uses for scrolling the ancient tools.
Finally, the reading asserts that ancient people didn't any apparatus that replied on electricity. .In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that when the people saw the power of electricity, they decided to utilize it for some activity.For instances, doctors used the power for shocking the sick persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ad line were antique electric batteries.However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubio...
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...mpelling evidence to refer them all. The author argues that the vessels dont ...
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...ocal people not with the archaeologists.It is maybe happen that in their perspecti...
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... uninteresting and they threw them out. Furthermore, the reading passage ho...
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...r uses for scrolling the ancient tools. Finally, the reading asserts that a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, furthermore, however, may, so, for instance, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4976744186 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87148943851 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641860465116 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3773817997 49.2860985944 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.857142857 110.228320801 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 21.698381199 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06452816374 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482073787743 0.272083759551 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19383636649 0.0996497079465 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810453591992 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245491575059 0.162205337803 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083420340843 0.0443174109184 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.3589403974 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.8541721854 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.