Happiness has a great value in everybody's life. In fact, it might be the first thing that most people wish to have in their families. However, there are many factors that impact our happiness which I believe that living in a very fact paced transforming world is one of them. Several persuasive reasons go as follow.
Firstly, people need to work hard to adapt themselves and their way of living to keep up with a world that changes every day, which brings too much stress and pressure to their lives. People won't be satisfied with what they have, because there is always something better that they don't possess. Companies need to work much harder to not fall behind in this world full of competition, to always create better products in lesser amount of time than what it was in the past. Consequently, employees are working in a much more stressful atmosphere that will eventually lead to increasing psychological problems. One good example of these changes can be technologies, which no one can deny it's tremendous impact on individual's lives.
People always should learn new techniques and materials to be able to work with these technologies that our lives relies on. For instance, nowadays, everyone should know how to work with computers and some other electronic devices to do a simple task like booking a flight ticket. They will need to update themselves with technologies' quick changes, indeed, it can be very frustrating and time consuming.
Furthermore, people are much busier than they were in the past, which keeps them from entertaining and pursuing hobbies. They are not able to spend time with their beloved ones and even if they could spare time, they are not as fresh and in the mood as they were in the past, which everything was much easier and simpler.
To sum up, due to technological improvements, the world is changing so fast and so the people's life style. In effort to keep up with these changes people should try harder and consume more time in the stressful workspaces than what people in the past had to deal with. As a result, people are not very happy and satisfied with their life as it's always changing.
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...he world is changing so fast and so the peoples life style. In effort to keep up with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82432432432 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59379069753 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6159318455 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321713975115 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105674091248 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080075877156 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185402304677 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987604293393 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.