Dear Mr Brown,
I am an employee in your company currently working in the I.I.T section. I am writing in regards to bring in to your notice that I am resigning from my post with one month of notice period.
I am working in this company since almost three years diligently and I am proud to say that my hard work has always been acknowledged and appreciated here. It was indeed, a great opportunity for me as I got a lot of exposure and training which has made me a better software engineer. I believe, I was fortunate to work under your tutelage as I have learned some essential lessons which holds significant place in practical life such as punctuality, accountability and diligence.
However, during this time, i also realized that I am not able to satisfy my soul as I was always craving for some more. I am very passionate about singing, few weeks ago, I received a letter from a music company in which I had applied two years ago. To my surprise, they not only extolled my voice but have also called me for a music album recording. As, this will demand a lot of time, so, I will not be able to continue my services any longer.
Thank you so much for associating me with your prestigious company and for your cooperation. I would be grateful if you can expedite this process.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Brown, I am an employee in your company current...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...ur company currently working in the I.I.T section. I am writing in regards to bri...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...king in the I.I.T section. I am writing in regards to bring in to your notice that I am resig...
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Line 7, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble to continue my services any longer. Thank you so much for associating me wit...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this process. Yours faithfully, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53974895397 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72664697677 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4718043726 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4166666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205730262523 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835328363573 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782984062006 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137118511604 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922439883946 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.