12 Aug: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising.
Many merchants have perennially been considered the issue of business efficiency which it has a prominent role in their professional lives. I highly concur with the idea that it would be indispensable for every business to invest money on advertisement in order to be successful. In addition, they could get more profits rather than wasting money provided that advertising must be considered. In the following paragraphs, I will point out some significant arguments on this perspective.
The first point that I would like to take into consideration is the fact that advertising is the best way to introduce products to people. In fact, every unprecedented product needs to become known and to be sold in high profits. Besides, every merchant wants to expand his or her business, so the advertising has the influential role. Therefore, the number of customers would be dramatically increased. For example, take the Apple Company into consideration. Without helping of advertising, it would be so hard to introduce its products throughout the world, and nobody could recognize what company it is.
Another vital point should be taken into consideration is that encouraging to buy a product would be the most important factor of each advertising. There are some rules in the advertisement to encourage customers; In fact, they may try to find some satisfaction features in products to purchase. Besides, repeating in the advertisement would be so essential because it would make people unconsciously to trust products' features as proper ones. To illustrate, Mc Donald is the pioneer in advertising to make people memorize about its product quality. Consequently, the power of advertising enables McDonald to be successful all over the world.
Last but not the least, any business should cause more convenience of people’s lives. As a matter of fact, what customers need should be realized precisely by a smart advertiser, for customers prefer to buy their essential needs. Furthermore, they must hire advertisers with both meticulous and productive features in order that they should regard all the situation that preponderance people may have. Take Iranian Melli Bank into account as an illustration. This bank starts providing some loans for people with more convenient conditions than other banks in Iran, so the number of its customers is increasing.
To conclude this perspective, each commerce should spend as much money as they can on the advertisement. Not only does advertising introduce the novel products, but it can also enable people to trust on their products. Besides, advertisers should consider people’s situation at any time, and provide them the best facilities to make increasing customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
... into consideration is that encouraging to buy a product would be the most important f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 5.04856512141 456% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1373.03311258 167% => OK
No of words: 428.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36448598131 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15347170417 2.5805825403 122% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 145.348785872 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528037383178 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 419.366225166 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9768938318 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8260869565 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73913043478 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153354251479 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469279732143 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500736300244 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946199837781 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586943620581 0.0443174109184 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 63.6247240618 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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