You’re moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say
– When and where do you move?
– Why do you move out?
– How do you feel about it?
Dear,
You have been a great neighbor of us and I want to say personally good bye through this letter. Our family will be leaving town to move abroad in next month because I have been offered a good job there. May wife will also have the opportunity to take higher study through scholarship and we find these opportunity hard to pass.
Thank you so much for being very friendly and thoughtful neighbor. You made us feel welcome in the neighborhood when we just transferred there and you have become very good friends of ours. We have enjoyed several years of our stay in the town because of you and we are so grateful. Our family, especially me, will miss you a lot. We know you will continuous to bring joy and love to others who will stay in the neighborhood and we hope that you will never change your kind ways.
Yours Sincerely,
Gaurav.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opportunity' or 'these opportunities'?
Suggestion: this opportunity; these opportunities
...r study through scholarship and we find these opportunity hard to pass. Thank you so much fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40372586268 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0688381991 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218482042306 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968944540501 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499835215084 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148769324158 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049471586946 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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