Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Economic progress is seen by many politicians as their main aim. At the same time, some aver that attention ought to be paid not only to economic progress but to other types of it in even proportions. Below both prospects will be discussed and author’s opinion will be given.
On the one hand, maintenance and buttressing of economic progress often has the highest priority for many governments. This is an understandable stance due to the fact that strong and vigorous economy benefits a society in many ways. For instance, there are a plethora of jobs available, employees’ salaries are growing, revenue of businesses keeps increasing and overall standards of living are rocketing as well. Consequently, if politicians manage to maintain state’s economy in a great shape, the voters will be satisfied and contented people will be giving their voices to the elected officials in power who have brought them prosperity. Thus, government’s believe that economic progress has a crucial importance is reasonable.
On the other hand, there are those who point out that other kinds of progress should not be neglected. Although those other types are less propelled by the mass media and politicians do not usually include them in their speeches, such progress as technological has been having a great impact on the humankind for many centuries. In fact, this progress has shaped our cities, homes and even the way we live. For instance, all means of transportation and communication that are used by people routinely are fruits that have been brought to the mankind by technological progress. Moreover, there is scientific, moral and other types of progress that play a considerable role in maintaining healthy functioning of a modern society. Thus, not only economic progress but other types of it as well seem to be evenly important.
Finally, in my opinion, although there is indeed a wide variety of progress that has effect on the way the society is working, I think that they aren’t equally important because economic underpins functioning of any country. Moreover, economic progress is essential for other types of progress because if there is sluggish economy there will be no resources available to develop new technologies or moral codes.
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Essay evaluation report
attention ought to be paid
attentions ought to be paid
On the one hand, maintenance and buttressing of economic progress often has the highest priority
On the one hand, maintaining and buttressing economic progresses often has the highest priority
elected officials in power who have brought them prosperity.
elected officials who have brought them prosperity in power.
Thus, government’s believe that economic progress has a crucial importance is reasonable.
Thus, government's belief that economic progress has a crucial importance is reasonable.
, such progress as technological has been having a great impact
, such progresses as technologies have been having a great impact
Finally, in my opinion,
In my opinion,
a wide variety of progress that has effect on the way
a wide variety of progresses that have effects on the way
if there is sluggish economy
if there is a sluggish economy
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1838 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.022 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.824 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.645 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24657534247 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0413476386 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5077415772 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337781797285 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115732283864 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633145058715 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213567557895 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428624390782 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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