The graph shows the amount spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

the line graph illustrates how much money spent on book in four countries, namely Germany, France, Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.

It is clear that the propotion of Germany was by far highest during the research period. At the same time, there was a significant increase in the amount of money in four coutries from 1995 to 2005.

In 1995, eighty millions of dollar was spent on book in Germany. At the same time, this figures in France, Italy, Austria was 55 millions of dollar, 50 millions of dollar, 30 millions of dollar relatively. Germany and Italy rose in the period time before they slightly went down in 2003, 1999 relatively.

In 2005, Germay still had a highest figure, at just under 100 millions of dollar. France stably went up to over 70 millions of dollar. Austria dramatically jumped to 70 millios of dollar, more than Italy which spent 60 millions of dollar in book in 2005.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the line graph illustrates how much money s...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'eighty million'.
Suggestion: eighty million
...coutries from 1995 to 2005. In 1995, eighty millions of dollar was spent on book in Germany. At...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '55 million'.
Suggestion: 55 million
...s figures in France, Italy, Austria was 55 millions of dollar, 50 millions of dollar, 30 milli...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '50 million'.
Suggestion: 50 million
...aly, Austria was 55 millions of dollar, 50 millions of dollar, 30 millions of dollar relativel...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '30 million'.
Suggestion: 30 million
...lions of dollar, 50 millions of dollar, 30 millions of dollar relatively. Germany and Italy ro...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...elatively. In 2005, Germay still had a highest figure, at just under 100 milli...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 million'.
Suggestion: 100 million
...ill had a highest figure, at just under 100 millions of dollar. France stably went up to over 7...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '70 million'.
Suggestion: 70 million
...f dollar. France stably went up to over 70 millions of dollar. Austria dramatically jumped to ...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '60 million'.
Suggestion: 60 million
... of dollar, more than Italy which spent 60 millions of dollar in book in 2005.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70440251572 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38061737968 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5855873207 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290396991769 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133182157104 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141439777721 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207825519657 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141091692385 0.0819641961636 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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