I agree with that one can feel true happiness if he has suffered some kind of sadness. A person should have multiple experiences to determine the proper value of any thing. In case of feeling person should experience all kinds of emotions then only he will understand the true value of happiness.
For understanding this claim we can consider reverse example of Gautam Buddha. Gautam was son of affluance and strong King. He never felt any kind of sorrowness in his childhood. He lived in very good ambience and lived a life like true prince. He never saw grief till his teenage life but in the later stage of life he first encountered with ceromony of funeral of his close friend and suddenly first time in his life he experinced sadness and grief. so after this shock he became different person and founded new religion. this happened beacuse he experienced many emotions and feeling his life and then only he understood true meaning of happiness.
We can also experience the true happines in eating tasty food only after eating insipid food. In my childhood days I used to go to restarunt on very few occasions only as compare to my current lifestyle in which I visits the restarunts every another day. But I enjoyed eating food in restarunt in my childhood because at that time my home servant used to cook very tasteless food. So I feels that If you want to feel true happiness in any activity you should expirience the negative side as well.
In countries like India, People are feeling true happiness of indipendence than United Kingdom or any other nation who doesn't have independece day. because people in India struggled for independnce for their country thats why they are enjoying it very well on the other hand UK people never fought for independence thus they will never understand true feeling for expiriencing independence.
In Summary, I would like to restate that any person can feel the true gravity of happiness only after feeling the sadness whereas people who are experiencing only happiness moments will not enjoy it properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas, i feel, in summary, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60114976763 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525568181818 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7611068583 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.705882353 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122111593896 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442654768948 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512488685504 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721591780782 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299967963936 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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