Although the author suggests three main hypotheses to support the reasons of Little Ice Age during the years of 1350 until 1900 CE, the professor finds them dubious and brings up three reasons to refute them all.
Firstly, the author states that one of the causes of Little Ice Age was disruption of ocean current which led melted glacier sent a large amount of cold water into the Gulf Stream because of warm climate before Little Ice Age. However, the professor states that more data on the fact that disruption on oceans happened in Europe and North America. In addition, no data has been found about southern parts such as New Zealand and South Africa which means if ocean disruption caused cooling water and making Little Ice Age, they must have been in this parts as well.
Secondly, the reading holds the view that Little Ice Age was due to the volcanic eruption which made a dust cloud and sulfur gas into the atmosphere and blocked the earth from sunlight. In contrast, the professor gainsays this idea and states that although the dust made the weather cooler, this dust did not have enough strength to make climate cool. Besides, not enough visual records were noticed which means that these effects such as snow green brown did not influence routinely and they were temporary.
Thirdly, the author argues that decrease of human population which caused agricultural lands to be useless, instead, growing numerous amount of trees in these lands was one of the important reasons of Little Ice Age. Carbon dioxide keeps the Earth warmer and the present of trees caused carbon dioxide absorbed more and the Earth become cooler. On the other hand, the speaker asserts that it is true that in a short period of time the population of people declined but after a while, they started to grow up again and it led more agricultural lands come back to use to grow crops for the thrived human population. Thus, the human population did not have a long term effect on Little Ice Age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... Little Ice Age, they must have been in this parts as well. Secondly, the reading...
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Line 7, column 417, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...asserts that it is true that in a short period of time the population of people declined but a...
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Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ed more agricultural lands come back to use to grow crops for the thrived human pop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, in addition, in contrast, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7768115942 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18094322199 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3486892494 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.818181818 110.228320801 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 21.698381199 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9090909091 7.06452816374 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528709998957 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18933007031 0.0996497079465 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117673054772 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280318970906 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107735545496 0.0443174109184 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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