550 describe a journey by car, plane or boat that you remember well.
you should say
where you went
how you travelled
why you went on the journey
and explain why you remember this journey well
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| 2017-10-02 | EugeneDubinchuk | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
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Comments
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
-I agree that the first two questions are not developed well. but there is a question
- the first two questions "where you went and how you travel" seems not to assume a lot of speaking.
for instance, I went from Omsk to Moscow by plane.
-How can I develop it better ? may you give me some examples?
thank you.
As we told, for first two
As we told, for first two questions, don't need to expand something, we just need to answer them straight forward according to the questions. The reason is that we may say some duplicated content or extra content in first two questions. It could be vey simple, like:
I still remember the journey from Omsk to Moscow by plane when I was 5 years old.
but put more content to other questions:
why you went on the journey
and explain why you remember this journey well
6.5 out of 9
firs 30 seconds are not developed well