02.10.2017 You are unhappy about a plat to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.
Explain where you live
Describe the problem
Give reasons why you do not want this development.
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing to share my concerns about the announced plans to increase usage of our airport.
I live in the small town that hosts the discussed airport. My house is situated on a crossroads of West and South streets nearby a local hospital in a couple of kilometers from the main airport building.
Firstly, the airport is located in the heart of our town and local infrastructure was not designed to handle the volume of cargo and the number of passengers that will have been arriving after the reconstruction will be finished. Secondly, aircrafts that land in the airport create a considerable noise that distress sleep of small children and elderly who live near the runway. Increasing in the number of flights accepted will undoubtedly worsen the current situation.
In other words, this development will unquestionably have a disadvantageous influence on the quality of life of local dwellers whose everyday traveling will be turned into a nightmare due to traffic jams. Moreover, if the plans were implemented, the taking off and landing jets would not ruin well-being of the town inhabitants of all ages but also have a detrimental effect on local wildlife that is well-known for its richness.
I hope that my complaint will be taken into account by the authorities.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
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passengers that will have been arriving after the reconstruction will be finished.
passengers who will be arriving after the reconstruction is finished.
would not ruin well-being of the town inhabitants of all ages but also have a detrimental effect
would not only ruin well-being of the town inhabitants of all ages but also have a detrimental effect
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flaws:
be careful don't leave same words like 'that, of...' in one sentence, It is hard to read. look:
aircrafts that land in the airport create a considerable noise that distress sleep of small children
advised:
aircrafts landing in the airport create a considerable noise to distress sleeps of small children
would not ruin well-being of the town inhabitants of all ages but also have a detrimental effect
advised:
would not only ruin inhabitants' well-being in the town but also have a detrimental effect
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 221 350
No. of Characters: 1088 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.856 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.923 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.879 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.724 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.809 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5
Most of topics are from real
Most of topics are from actual IELTS exams. So there is no great difference from this one or that one. They are all challenging in our view. Your main problem is related to the language not the topic. Keeping the marks always stable no matter what topics is your real challenging.
Ok. Dear Sir,
Ok. Dear Sir,
what mark could I get on the test day with my current level of preparation?
Thank you.
Your conditions are not
Your conditions are not stable currently. Some times good, some times not. It should be around 7.5 out of 9 in your current level if topics are developed properly. 'properly' means two conditions:
1. it is not out of topic
2. some issues you have nowadays should be removed.
Overall, you are more than average in writing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13574660633 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95823109674 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0421077798 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12010348983 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047733373508 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311137439252 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661743834898 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419367467965 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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