Throughout the world, and more so in the developed countries, people are living for a much longer time than they were merely half a century ago, largely owing to the advancement in medicine and public healthcare. Although we have achieved the longest life expectancy rates in the history of mankind, it is imperative that we prepare ourselves fro dealing with the negative repercussions that this phenomenon is going to unleash on us in the near future. This essay will shed some light on these problems and also give recommendations to tackle the same.
Increasing life expectancy is directly associated with the increase in population size as well as inflated healthcare costs. More and more people are living a longer life - with this comes the increased incidence of healthcare problems that are accompanied by advanced age which, in turn, has a proportional relationship with the burden of healthcare on the society at large. Another mjor impact of rising life expectancy is on the ever-increasing population size, such that the future holds for us a nightmarish increase in the demand for food as well as space to live. This will only decrease agricultural land and push for deforestation in its wake in order to meet the demand for food production.
A few concrete measures come to mind to help us brace for the impact, namely, vertical planning and improvement of local industry. Vertical farming is an alternative to conventional agriculture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...is imperative that we prepare ourselves fro dealing with the negative repercussions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1218487395 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03461816496 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0455826066 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.444444444 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216274888562 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796181062952 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366265387407 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124828632443 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411295037083 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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