Many people prefer to read novels instead of watching them on movies. In my view, I really do not like to read too much, even though, watching pictures, landscapes and visual effects are more enjoyable for me than reading without those characteristics. However, this opinion could vary depending on a variety of circumstances.
First of all, it is well known that not everything a movie based on a novel could include every single detail during the film. For example, Harry Potter, this novel had a great success because the author could bring us a continuity, during the story with many events which never could be described totally inside the film. In spite of the special or visual effects, readers who could watch the same story in the film, are the best critics to support this.
Secondly, we can state that books which include a novel contain a wide number of pages, and cannot put every page inside the film, what I mean is that producers and directors would spend many hours to describe every detail included in the novel. Moreover, we can mention that films are only the summary of the books. And as a result of that, people who like to read novels and short stories prefer the books instead of the films.
Additionally, many people state that reading books is an opportunity to be relaxed, clarify your mind and also this hobby helps to avoid stress, loneliness, frustrations, etc. Even though, when you read books, no matter the story presented there, supposedly you are more able to communicate and affront your daily life.
In conclusion, as I mentioned before, I prefer to watch the novels more than read them. Moreover, reading novels takes a lot of time, and watching them takes just 2 or 3 hours. Therefore, if you do not have enough time to read a story, you better watch it on TV or in a movie theather. But this opinion could vary depending also of what story is and how interesting events are happening over there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72941176471 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47795819509 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0943997757 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.45110844103 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236811469112 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855467880904 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635162948401 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136458738081 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055836974435 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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