Many people prefer reading fiction stories than watching them on movies. In my view, I really do not like to read very much, even though, watching pictures, landscapes, visual effects, etc. are more enjoyable for me, more than reading without those characteristics. However, this opinion could have many variations depending on some circumstances.
First of all, it is well known that a movie based on a fiction novel could never include every single detail from the paper story during the film. For example, Harry Potter, this novel had an important success, because the author brings us a continuity, during the story, many events in which were happened could never be been described inside the film, totally. In spite of the visual or special effects, readers who could see the same story in the film, are the best critics to support this statement and its importance.
Secondly, we can state that books which are including novels contain an extensive number of pages, therefore, producers cannot put everything on the film, what I mean is that film directors would have to spend many hours, in order to describe every detail from the novel. Moreover, we can mention that films are only the summary from the books. As a result, people who like to read fiction novels and short stories prefer books instead of films.
Thirdly, when you refer to a fiction novel, particularly a book, authors can describe in words all of they want, what I mean, it seems to be impossible drawing the entire thoughts from writers on a film movie. Although, with special and visual effects directors are pretending to accomplish this feature.
In conclusion, many people state that reading books is an opportunity to be relaxed, clarifying your mind and also this hobby helps us avoiding stress, loneliness, frustrations, etc. Even though, when you read books, no matter the story, supposedly you are more able to communicate and affront your daily life. As I mentioned before, I prefer to watch the novels more than read them. Maybe I am wrong, because, for many people, I could be a lazy person due to having poor culture. However, I think that reading those stories take a lot of time, and watching them take at least 2 or 3 hours. Finally, as a solution, if you do not have enough time to read a book, you better watch it on TV or in a movie theater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'be' and 'been'.
Suggestion: be never been
...any events in which were happened could never be been described inside the film, totally. In ...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to avoid' or 'avoid'.
Suggestion: to avoid; avoid
... your mind and also this hobby helps us avoiding stress, loneliness, frustrations, etc. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, at least, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81435643564 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53417359899 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1497391791 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.055555556 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 5.45110844103 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239938716152 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862102471109 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731068140666 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132370553586 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690449560221 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.