Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with metro services that happened in our area last week. I was waiting for the train in City Center station at 8 AM on 25th October and train didn’t arrive on time. Surprisingly train was late by an hour and arrived at 9 AM after when the station was over crowded. Eventually, it got delayed for officer goers, college students and school students. Few people missed the scheduled trains because of this postponement.
It would be better if we are informed beforehand so that we will plan for alternate arrangement to commute. Also, please arrange for more services during peak hours from 7 AM to 10 AM during morning time and 4 PM to 9 PM during evening time so that even if a metro train got delayed, we can travel in the following metro service. This precursor to leverage the service often and it will fortify the usage of public transportation. Looking forward for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Zara
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with metro services that happened in our area last week. I was waiting for the train in City Center station at 8 AM on 25th October and train didn’t arrive on time. Surprisingly train was late by an hour and arrived at 9 AM after when the station was over crowded. Eventually, it got delayed for officer goers, college students and school students. Few people missed the scheduled trains because of this postponement.
It would be better if we are informed beforehand so that we will plan for alternate arrangement to commute. Also, please arrange for more services during peak hours from 7 AM to 10 AM during morning time and 4 PM to 9 PM during evening time so that even if a metro train got delayed, we can travel in the following metro service. This precursor to leverage the service often and it will fortify the usage of public transportation. Looking forward for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Zara
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30322580645 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9616627779 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729032258065 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9410155525 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7272727273 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604881008668 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190244239084 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404783500979 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329424986694 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465877283967 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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