Nowadays, psychologists emphasize on strong relationship between parents and children. As parents are busier and have limited time, there is a hot debate about the most efficient way of using time to be a good parents. Although some people may think that parenting is all about teaching new skills and help the children to do their assignments, in my view, playing with our sons and daughters is more effective.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that kids need friends not mentors. Childhood is a very dangerous stage of growing and children prefer to spend their time with somebody who get along with them. To clarify, if parents want to teach their children and act like supervisors, they will not trust them to tell them their mistakes because they are afraid of blaming. Therefore, mothers and fathers should create a cordiality which allows their child confide freely.
Another subtle point that I should deem is that we should consider social success as important as education success. For instance, if parents invest on one aspect of offspring’s life, later when they enter to society, they will not communicate in a good manner with people. After some years, they do not have happy marriages or make divorce which increase the rate of depression and suicide. It is exactly the explanation of difference between IQ and EQ which scientists try to convey people. In other words, it means that healthy children need to play and have fun to understand how to cooperate in real life. Hence, if parents play with them and train them to share their toys, they perceive that in future it is vital to share their idea in a group to assist others.
Admittedly, there are some advantages of working on school homework that we cannot ignore. Recently shown, the grades of those students whose parents helped them to do their assignments are significantly higher than control groups who study alone. Nevertheless, this concern can be eliminated if we allow students to study with their friends and collaborate.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in previous statements, the first responsibility of parents is to protect children then provide an excellent environment for them to speak frankly and fearlessly which is essential for their mental health and success in society. Pay attention to this role makes you perfect parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for instance, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06106870229 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72763092732 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9846310569 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239236446123 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667214571333 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624736823438 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126354386868 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077888420186 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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