The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagrams indicate the percentages of individuals in Britain who buy three different kinds of music albums, in regards to their gender and age group. According to the charts, there are three genres of music and 4 age groups apparent.
Overall, it can be clearly observed that when people of the youngest age group absolutely refuse to listen to classical music, elderly people (aged over 45) have a relatively lower interest in rock and pop music. Moreover, all three types of music are commonly purchased by more men than women.
According to the first chart, pop music is highly popular amo...
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