In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime ? How can we deal with those causes ?
At a global level, an increasing crime rate has caused damage to several countries reputation, property and people's sentiments. In my opinion an escalation in crime numbers are a result of lenient criminal laws and social problems that are incessantly ignored by legal organizations and governments.
Many countries tend to legislate lenient laws fro criminals as an opportunity for reform. However this has caused people to take the law for granted. For example, sexual harassment is penalized with just two years of jail term. Such kind of crimes are often repeated. An ideal way of dealing with this is having much more stringent laws leaving no room for criminal incitement.
Secondly, criminal rates increase in countries that face poverty. The poor and deprived do not have enough money to afford basic necessities which makes them venal at a very young age. For instance, children learn to rob food from shops for their survival. This instills the attitude of a criminal which is arduous to change at the later stages of life. Governments and NGO's must pay keen attention to the issue of poverty and help them with food, shelter, education and counselling.
Finally, a majority of crimes are committed due to psychological disorders. There is inadequate attention paid to one's mental health. In a time of stiff competition, peoples decisions are driven by unstable mindsets and lack of rationale. For example, Bipolar patients cannot control their anger and this could prove their culpability towards harming someone. Therefore,people must pay avid attention to their mental health while governments can help by raising awareness programs.
In conclusion, while crime rates have surged due to lackadaisical laws and ignorance of social problems, it remains plausible to set the figures right by having strict laws, good amenities for the poor and improving peoples mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30897009967 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82919187456 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5157346284 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120908386311 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383231340226 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376627018163 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676877144294 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398152011487 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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