Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While museums is a place to educate people about the history as well as present many people think that museums should be used as a place of entertainment.This essay will examine both sides of the argument.
It is certainly true that museum can be served as a place of education. The millennials can learn about the history, heritage and culture of their ancestors.The present generation can examine the artifacts used by their ancestors and learn about them.so museums can be treated as one of the place of education too.
However some people are of the belief that museums should only be limited for the purpose of entertainment. Many parents take their kids to museums for entertainment as well as educating them. For instance take the example of the tussads museum where there are was statues of famous personalities from film industry to sports person's to politicians of present and past which can serve as entertainment as well as educating museum.
To conclude, As we know that a individual can learn a lot while having fun,so museums should be more of educating people while providing some form of entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02659574468 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9267260619 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7465507784 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306741942466 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173478756685 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839483265229 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210236206102 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700695284733 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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