do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Improving schools is the most important factor the successful development of a country.

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do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Improving schools is the most important factor the successful development of a country.

The issue at hand is importance of improving schools, is improving schools the most important factor for the successful development of a country?
In this point of view, the issue is important because improving schools is effective factor for the successful development of a country for two reasons.

I believe that improving schools for the successful development of a country is the better option because the children will make and evolve future of a country.
The improving schools is preferable because the children will make future of a country.
The children will make future of a country because responsibility of a country will be duty in the future.
For this reason, i think the issue superior to consider other option as most important factor for the successful development of a country.
Finally, i think the issue is the right choice because the children will advance the country in the future.
If children confront effective education, they will evolve the country in the future.
Ultimately, i feel that improving school is the correct one.
I believe this because improving schools will cause better future for the country in order to the children eill make evolve future of country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, i feel, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15228426396 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79184125495 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 212.727598566 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.340101522843 0.524837075471 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0992211744 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244359847834 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1384267812 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115915232333 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1384267812 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115915232333 0.0645574589148 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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