In my opinion that the valuable and massive amount of information made available to people today because of the internet is responsible for the increase in general awareness and exposure among the society.
First and foremost, information made available by the internet helps us to make well informed decisions. I have innumerable personal experiences to support this reason. For example, I bought a car a few weeks back. I wanted to buy a second-hand car rather than a new one. So , I went to a website called Ola and looked at the posts written by multiple people willing to sell their car. This plateform also provided the ratings and information regarding the condition of these used cars. Specifications of the cars available on the website including the condition of their tiers, Kilometers covered by the car and mileage helped me select one from the the plethora of options available. I was able to get the work done in about an hour . In contrast, during the pre-internet time it was a matter of weeks which required a rigorous asking around about any used car available and then visiting these prospective sellers to see the condition of that car.
Secondly, internet made it possible to get the information on click of a button. For instance, I still remember the time we used to have encyclopedia and even that was not enough to get all the information required. Hours of searching in a library or digging into a book was required to gather a general understanding of a simple question such as, how the engine of a car works. In contrast, today there are numerous youtube videos that can teach one about this topic under five minutes.
Finally, availability of plentiful information has also provided the much needed exposure to people. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I wanted to be an engineer and there is no engineer in my family. So, when it came to selecting a major which we need to do in the first year even before getting a sense of what these prospective majors are even about. In the times before internet, to get information on such a important issue required an awkward phone call to a distant relative. However, availability of the internet made it possible for me to read multiple articles regarding various majors offered by my college and I chose Information and Control Engineering as my major which I did not even know existed before I read about it on the internet.
To put it briefly I am a strong supporter for the plethora of information provided by the internet as it provides better exposure, saves time and helps us make better decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...econd-hand car rather than a new one. So , I went to a website called Ola and look...
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Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...r and mileage helped me select one from the the plethora of options available. I was ab...
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Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...r and mileage helped me select one from the the plethora of options available. I was ab...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le to get the work done in about an hour . In contrast, during the pre-internet ti...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and there is no engineer in my family. So, when it came to selecting a major which we n...
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Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...re internet, to get information on such a important issue required an awkward pho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79111111111 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83629354022 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504444444444 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.209687553 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61904761905 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147276701665 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448988611998 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353047763604 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882967084598 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219052996826 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.