Many people believe that human activity is causing the earth’s temperature to rise. They say that this global warming will have dreadful consequences for our environment, such as drought and flooding. What should governments do to help prevent global warming? Give reasons for your suggestions.
Throughout the world, the issue concerning the global warming never cease to fuel public interest. The influence of this phenomenon, such as climate changes and growing number of natural disasters have alerted governments to take immediate actions.
First, governments should monitor and supervise the industrial activities. It is reported that the pollution generated by industrial process is accounted for 50% of global warming. Since the burning of fossil fuels in industrial activities is a main source of greenhouse gases, to control and lessen its usage while punish any illegal release of i...
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