In modern world, Technology is developing at a tremendous rate simply to ease the human life and vehicles are no exception. But is this advancement in technology really helping people or there is a necessity to make certain amendments? It is because of the lamentable fact that shows rapid rise in road traffic accidents in spite of the boon of technology. In my essay, I will shed some light on the reasons of these mishappenings followed by the advice to resolve this pernicious issue.
To embark upon, although there are a slew of factors responsible for the road accidents however, I will discuss here the main three of them. Firstly, the constantly deteriorating condition of the roads, there are pits and large holes all over the roads in all the cities. Second, incessant increase in hoard on roads which leaves no space to drive and people often hit other vehicles to get ahead. Last but not the least and perhaps the most common cause is the negligence of traffic rules. I can reminisce, in Delhi people try to jump the red light for which they drive resoundingly fast that leads to fatal accidents frequently. Additionally, there are thousands of drink and drive cases, just in Delhi alone hundreds of cases have been reported last year.
In contrast, there are various ways through which this deplorable situation can be brought under control. As I aforementioned about the poor status of roads, our government must pay attention towards this matter and invest money in revamping them. Also, more flyovers should be build to accommodate the immense traffic. Finally, traffic police department should take robust steps to implement the traffic rules and must take strong action against those who do not abide by these laws.
To recapitulate, all the citizens should take the responsibility of the present scenario as it is our duty to drive safe and follow the laws. If we want to make this world a better place to live in than we must change ourselves first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
... To embark upon, although there are a slew of factors responsible for the road acc...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...duty to drive safe and follow the laws. If we want to make this world a better pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, so, in contrast, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88988095238 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68364433646 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4679459175 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884677942084 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261861743096 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252260276589 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460081743532 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327444521418 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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