A group of business people visited you at work and you found a coat that belongs to someone on their team.
Write a letter to the leader of the group:
Tell them why you enjoyed their visit
Why you think it belongs to someone on their team
Suggest how you can return it
Dear Ali,
I am writing to thank you for visiting our office on last Monday. We had been looking forward to this for a while. I personally enjoyed spending some quality time with you and learned a lot of things about business in general and ours in particular.
I would also like to inform you that I found a coat in my office after you left which I believe was left by one of you. As far as I can recall, no one else came into my office on that day so I assume that it belongs to one of you. It is a dark, zip up coat and it looks new.
If that is indeed yours, I can send it to your office by courier as it is faster and safer. If you have any other suggestions about how to send it, please let me know.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Suresh Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 632.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0972204463 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1590671094 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286425488019 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098552026351 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805854649231 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166928308248 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536196117619 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.