tpo 42
There are many types of jobs, and being satisfied in your job is not an easy thing.
Some jobs tell you to do a certain type of tasks during the work day, and others provide more types. In my opinion, having different activities to do every day at work is better. I think that this provides an exciting and healthy day in one hand, and gives more experience on the other hand.
First of all, doing more than one thing a day is more exciting. I think that making similar tasks continuously for several hours in really boring. If there were many tasks or activities that one is asked to do, he can get excited every time he finishes one of them, and moves to the other. Moreover, he can choose the appropriate order of accomplishing them that is fine for him. So, he will feel more comfortable in his work, and he will like the job more.
For instance, a restaurant manager with many employees can give more than one task to every one of them. He can give them the option that every two of them can alternate their work with each other. This can make them more excited, and they will feel more comfortable.
If I had the chance to work in such restaurant, I would never leave the work!
On the other hand, doing different tasks in a job can give the workers more experience. If they do the same type of work for years, they won't learn a lot. Whereas they can improve many skills by doing several things. Moreover, this is also beneficial for the employers. This is due to that every worker is able to do many tasks, and if some employee is late or on a vacation, there is at least one worker that can work in his place. This decreases the stress that can happen in the company.
For instance, I worked last summer in a teaching center. I had more than one thing to do there: I taught, answered the telephone, and sometimes I worked at the reception.
In that summer, I learnt many things that I would never be able to know if I did only one task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... work for years, they wont learn a lot. Whereas they can improve many skills by doing s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, so, whereas, at least, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30623306233 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2961975022 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471544715447 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.363370577 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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