tpo 49

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , And
...in every new single stages in their life,And in my point of view I prefer to have a ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...nd in my point of view I prefer to have a small number of close friends over a long period of tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...all number of close friends over a long period of time for different reasons. And the impact o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... that why I believe that is over a long period of time they became like our sisters or brother...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ey became like our sisters or brothers. Furthermore we now every things about each other, a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this trait because when I trust someone i can share with them all my life small d...
^
Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my life small details. For example, one i was in the school i faced a huge proble...
^
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s. For example, one i was in the school i faced a huge problem with other colleag...
^
Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'old the best'.
Suggestion: old the best
...th other colleagues and in this case my old best friend helped me to solve the problem w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rth day every years, and they know what i prefer and what i do not like. Moreover...
^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s, and they know what i prefer and what i do not like. Moreover, all the awesome ...
^
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...tioned above, and I believe that having few number of persons over many years is better th...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38244514107 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2674395303 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3173823613 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 5.45110844103 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 58.1214874552 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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