Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why people do this and will you consider doing this yourself?
International affiliations are always welcome by international students as they are quite aware about the increasing competition and working in the non-radical environment. They are very enthusiastic in achieving their targets in their early ages and therefore, they inclined towards international educations.
At first, it gives you international recognition and hence increase the chances of employment opportunities. There are some universities that are associated with many reputed employers across the glove. These employers have contracts to hire their university students. While studying in their own country student might not be able to have the same facilities and therefore ended up with struggling and distress.
Additionally, international universities have diversified portfolio. Many students who come from different cultures, genders, ethnics and tradition get a chance to interact with each other and learn about different methods of living standards. This help them to develop not only their intellectual skills but also increase the cognitive skills. Moreover, they are more tend towards pluralism without discriminating over color, age or religion. Though, some students find it difficult to adjust in multi-cultural environment but the end results are impeccable.
I definitely would consider choosing studying internationally because it will provide me to grow further in my professional life. Different learning techniques such as presentations and various assignments assist me to broaden the views and allow to use these skills in practical world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96475770925 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3094697164 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691629955947 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2465823458 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100202189745 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363742047865 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315650795193 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548908279205 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223329204363 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.99 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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