Euthanasia is no longer acceptable in the modern society. Discuss the solutions to accept this fact.

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Euthanasia is no longer acceptable in the modern society. Discuss the solutions to accept this fact.

The substantial influence of Euthanasia has sparked the controversy among the public around the globe in recent years. While specifically argument claim that painless death is not an acceptable term in a modern society, a group of luminaries dispute otherwise and hold an opponent's view. I am inclined highly to accept that physician-assisted suicide might have positive outcomes. The agenda of this article to elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of "Mercy Killing", which clarifies how it impacts health economics, tax-payers, as well as ethnic groups, and will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why silent death, is supported. The most conspicuous one lies in the fact that permanently brain damaged disabled, who will be in a coma forever, cost a fortune on health systems. For instance, a recently undertaken study in Sydney hospitals has shown that 15% of the total hospital's beds have been occupied by patients in coma. Hence, it can be clearly seen that painless death can help health economics, health sustainability, health policy, health institutions, as well as tax-payers.

Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influences of Euthanasia, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that no one can predict the future of health science. Moreover, it is strongly claimed that voluntary killing is not ethical, and it is against the human rights. Therefore, the importance of nurse-assisted suicide and its detriments which may affect patient families, ethnic groups, mortality rate, religious groups NGOs, human rights activist, people in severe health conditions adversely could be seen with clarity.

To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my sentiment is that the benefits of Euthanasia might outweigh its drawbacks.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55208333333 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11914381838 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9262458521 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121713132019 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392156649671 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451397956945 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667569925812 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056606291633 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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