Now a days the world has become closer. Everything is connected to each other. Therefore, it has become essentail to keep pace with what is happening around the world even if does not affecting our daily life. From enhancing general knowledge to take big decisions in our lives, it is very much important to have idea of the events happening around of us.
Firstly, knowledge is a great power. If we do not allow ourselves to enhance our knowledge power, we will not be able to keep pace with others. For instance, if we do not keep idea about recent incidents around the world and we go on a gathering whom are talking about the current political affairs of USA; we will not be able to interact with them. As a result we will not be the part of those social gatherings. Therefore, we need to increase our knowledge by knowning about current international affairs, political issues, health issues, education, environment, sports etc so that we can interact with other knowlagble person.
Secondly, it is very much important to know what is going on around the world if you are going to move to a different country. For example, if you want to go for higher studies in Canada, you need to have knowledge about their political affairs, what are benifits for international students, what are the prospectives in your respective field of study. As a matter of fact that you need to keep outside knowlegde as it is a life changing decision for your future career.
Thirdly, it can be said that we need to have general knowledge about the on going events around the world to know other people better. We will be able to know other's culture, lifestyle through those events. Therefore, it will be helpful to connect with outsiders and help them when they need it.
We can say from the above stated examples that keeping knowledge of outside world is important for us as it has direct or indirect affect on our lives in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days the world has become closer. Everything...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days the world has become closer. Everything...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...ening around the world even if does not affecting our daily life. From enhancing general ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...will not be able to interact with them. As a result we will not be the part of tho...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...eed to have general knowledge about the on going events around the world to know other p...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ant for us as it has direct or indirect affect on our lives in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, talking about, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66374269006 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56541416092 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0244416363 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6875 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267291936626 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909070622174 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654435859392 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150582191293 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552065273978 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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