Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.
Who has not had a problem when you get older? What is the first person who you ask for advice? Think about about and it is probable that your answer be a relative. When you first become an adult, many changes will you suffer as in physical as emotional changes. It is probable that you need some guidance in order to develop yourself the best way. It is true that some young adults consider more influential in their lives to their friends; however, I strongly believe that the most important influence when you arrive to adulthood is your own family. Its influence overweigthes the friend’s influe...
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